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6 loglines
3 reviews

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A teenage rebellion girl(18) accepts her friend?s $500 challenge to stay alone all overnight in the graveyard and experience series of fearful activities but an abnormal force cannot let her escape from graveyard.

March 26, 2020
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An unsuccessful & frustrated young screenwriter search for ghosts to get inspired for writing horror screenplay as a final attempt

March 24, 2020
After failing to reconnect with his estranged daughter, a corrupt NYPD cop changes his ways and goes after mobsters that are attacking the city.

January 29, 2019
A stubborn, US ex-soldier (28) is resurrected from hell to change humanity for the better, upon sacrificing his soul to hell.

January 20, 2019
After being rejected by his daughter (21), a corrupt NYPD officer (47) decides to turn over a new leaf and initiate a massive undercover operation in order to prove his daughter that he?s changed and make her proud of him.

January 20, 2019
A retired undefeated boxing champion William leads a simple life after losing all his money and a former boxing champion Michael insults him in a live press conference which leads the battle between their sons as they become rivals. The outcome of the battle leads Michael to challenge William to fight him in the ring and he accepts it.

March 1, 2016

Recent reviews

on A young priest journeys with the devil and finds God.

No hook, premise & inciting incident..
on An unsuccessful & frustrated young screenwriter search for ghosts to get inspired for writing horror screenplay as a final attempt

Thanks for your valuable feedback. Basically,? he is a screenwriter who writes high budget action screenplays and fed up with rejections of all his submissions from past 5 years. And his wife encourages him to give a one last final…
on When a young psychic girl becomes the victim of abuse she must use her ethereal powers to stop the horror and find a path to normality.

Your log-line seems better but instead of using "horror" you can use "abusement". And you should specify in your script how she got those powers.