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on ?Two uninspired and perpetually high film students document the final days of an emotionally destroyed detective, believing his demise will give their career the kick-start it needs.?

SunsetCoast thinks the detective does because the students are documenting "the final days of an emotionally destroyed detective." While some of SunsetCoast's questions may not need to be in the logline, he is right to wonder who the main characters…
on Untitled urban fantasy

Maybe something like... "When a hole swallows a bus of New York City commuters and places them out of the reach of rescue, an Army reject must find the courage to help get everyone to safety and avoid the creatures…
on A hotshot reality TV cameraman tries to outsmart a stalker who records him in his home and airs the footage on television.

I think what's missing is why recording him matters. "But when the stalker realizes he's on camera..." or something in that arena is missing. Also are there really "hotshot reality TV cameramen?" And, who is the stalker stalking? If its…