Skandha Sreeram

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• on Sick of being ridiculed at, A down on the luck super hero sets 24 hours to solve any case .

  Ok will work on the original one . Thanks a lot everyone.

• on Sick of being ridiculed at, A down on the luck super hero sets 24 hours to solve any case .

  Revised Logline : Sick of being ridiculed by the public, A private detective sets 24 hours to solve any case or else quit but the first case he receives can only be solved at the 25th hour.

• on Sick of being ridiculed at, A down on the luck super hero sets 24 hours to solve any case .

  Thank you !!

• on To find his cancer treatment, a broke man goes after a serial killer who has a large bounty placed on his head .

  That was a spelling mistake. I didn?t know how to edit an already posted log line. My bad.

• on An isolated English teacher in pakistan falls in love with his student only to be kidnapped by the taliban, his only chance of winning his love and life back is to teach English in 10 days to Osama Bin laden's successor.

  Wow Thanks claude mclver. I have not started writing yet and was just exploring this idea and posted. You have given me a lot to think about.

• on An isolated English teacher in pakistan falls in love with his student only to be kidnapped by the taliban, his only chance of winning his love and life back is to teach English in 10 days to Osama Bin laden's successor.

  Actually the love part and the 10 days part has been removed. And now it simply stands as: When an isolated American teacher in a rural Pakistan is kidnapped by Al-Qaeda, he must teach English to Osama bin Laden?s successor…

• on An isolated English teacher in pakistan falls in love with his student only to be kidnapped by the taliban, his only chance of winning his love and life back is to teach English in 10 days to Osama Bin laden's successor.

  I understand that the love part will not be good to include in the logline . Thanks Dpg and Richiev

• on The President's Chopper crashes over enemy's territory, he must fight his way out or be killed.

  Agree with Patrockd. The President has to get out of enemy's territory and his only way to escape from there is to kill the terrorists and these were terrorist he had vowed to capture with the use of American military…

• on The President's Chopper crashes over enemy's territory, he must fight his way out or be killed.

  The U.S president assures people that the remaining al quaeda terrorists will be killed. He then boards a chopper to leave from Iraq to U.S , that's when his chopper crashes and falls into the enemy's (al quaeda) territory. Now…

• on Two rival gangsters team up to track down a cop, while one wants him dead, the other wants him alive.

  Appreciate your comment a lot guys. This website has really helped me. I got the idea 3 days ago and just posted it. I will work on the Motivation, stakes and develop the story. .

• on Two rival gangsters team up to track down a cop, while one wants him dead, the other wants him alive.

  I should probably cut out the 'rival' word. Two gangsters team up to track down a cop, while one wants him dead, the other wants him alive

• on A family of losers, while trying to gain foothold in life, are forced into action to save their kidnapped son

  Appreciate your comments guys. Will work on it

• on Detective Kiron Pollard picks a team of 5 individuals to fight the latest crime menace plaguing the Brisbane city. The team consists of former criminals.

  Thanks for commenting guys. It was very helpful. Could you also comment on my latest logline that I have posted today

• on When a brash college photographer sneaks into Vietnam to find her G.I. boyfriend and his squad in order to prove her worth, she then has to make it out of the jungle alone after she captures some incriminating photos.

  Nice

• on Picked for a top secret military mission, an elite female sharpshooter team have twenty-four hours to assassinate one target, with only one shot?in the deadly mountains of Afghanistan.

  Very interesting. edge of the seat action thriller