mkwrittencreations
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Thanks all!
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Maybe replacing 'hardships and malfunctions' with the actual example(s) of hardships and malfunctions would make it more specific. First of all, depending on the type of hardships that the disenchanted family man might encounter on his way home, viewers may/may…
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Like others said - grammar & the seemingly incomplete second sentence was confusing to me. Also, it's unclear what genre this is. So I don't know what I should expect from the movie. Is this something I would watch with…