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on To overcome her performance anxiety, a renowned classical pianist pursues an anonymous affair with a man who is sharply skilled at erotic knife-play.

Thanks so much for your 'facing fear to fight fear' comment. It's influencing me to alter this logline to suggest your observation and mmckean's question above. So what if the logline read, "To overcome her fear of performing, a renowned…
on To overcome her performance anxiety, a renowned classical pianist pursues an anonymous affair with a man who is sharply skilled at erotic knife-play.

I love those questions! Watching the movie answers them. Loglines are supposed to present the problem and/or the situation, but not spell it all out for you--or why see the movie? If the setup intrigues or compels you enough you'll…
on To overcome her performance anxiety, a renowned classical pianist pursues an anonymous affair with a man who is sharply skilled at erotic knife-play.

Thanks for your feedback mmckean. If I remove the fact she's a pianist, it will simply look like a woman simply pursues an anonymous affair--but why, and what makes that a movie? Being that the pressures of her profession have…