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on When an mysterious artifact appears on the black market, a pair of dealers must outsmart the criminals of the city’s underworld in order to attain it.

What is the artefact's worth? Why and what do they want with the artefact? This is nit picky though, beyond that I see the film and how it could play out.
on ‘When a mentally ill patient refuses to leave his home, a probationary constable discovers her training could never prepare her for the deadly lesson she?s about to face.’

U{DATED VERSION:?'When a probationary constable encounters a mentally ill patient refusing to leave his home, she must negotiate with him to avoid a fatal ending.'
on When an mysterious artifact appears on the black market, a pair of dealers must outsmart the criminals of the city’s underworld in order to attain it.

Whats up with the ALL CAPS?! Bit disconcerting don't you think? ;)
on sorry… just wanted to delete and couldn’t see how…

It's too long, you can close this down by half if you focus on the points made previously from other reviews about event and action. You have to choose which is the event, the father being released or the girlfriend…