Matthew Lock

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on When a young Chicano male meets up with a beautiful cultured Salsa dancer two dissimilar worlds collide to form one incredible dance duo.

This is a very interesting idea that many options for potential. Just a couple of suggestions: -More description of the Chicano male (eg. a reckless and unrefined Chicano youth) *This will create more character contrast with the cultured Salsa Dancer…
on "Two teenagers on a romantic spring break in a remote cabin discover, to their horror, that they both share the same father. And he was a Nazi. And the cabin is surrounded by Jewish zombies."

Interesting Idea. Can see this as a Cabin-house horror comedy mixed with a hint of Tarantino. A couple of suggestions: -Description of the characters (eg. A Pair of innocent teenagers) - Specifics of the location to create drama (remote cabin…