Marlene2

Penpusher · 26 points

274 points to Logliner

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on Four intertwined stories between young people in a single night smoking weed on 4/20.

It's a description but from what I understand about loglines there has to be more. What is the struggle between the protagonist and antagonist? What happens if the protagonist doesn't win?
on 2. A daughter of a longtime married couple contemplating divorce looks to convince his parents to reconcile before a young and jaded divorce attorney finalizes it.

Can they reconcile before the divorce. I have sympathy with the daughter, but I am wondering if this is all too common. However, lots of people came from families of broken marriages so it might resonate with a lot of…
on Two FBI cybercrime specialists must track down the world’s most notorious cybercriminals before they succeed in hacking into the Federal Reserve Bank of New York’s online website.

I think this has potential. There is a timeline there: before they hack into the bank. There is the race against time. Computer work is frustrating. It increases the suspense.