MarinaM

Penpusher · 126 points

174 points to Logliner

on When an idealistic attorney discovers the man she freed from prison is a cold-blooded killer she chooses payback over ethics and mounts a stunning plan to put him back inside.

I like this a lot! I recommend very little: just pare it down a little to put more focus on the key points. The following is one word too long (you want to aim for 25 words), but tells the…
on A neglected eight-year-old girl comes up with a dangerous idea to try and communicate with her recently deceased mother on Halloween.

This is my first review, so please forgive any faux pas (and let me know if I've made any). You can remove some words that don't help, like "try and" and "comes up with the dangerous idea." Maybe, "A neglected…