Marcus Hyndes

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The son of a rich man betrays his Dad for a lot of money, but reforms in jail and wins back the respect of his family after an agonising standoff.

September 1, 2013
When the insane dog terrorized the girls, Sarah, the youngest sibling, volunteers to venture out for help against the muted objections of the older girls.

August 7, 2013

on When a Nigerian hooker working in Dubai escapes barely with her life after killing a man in self-defense, she makes a vow to wreak as much havoc as she can against the rich, corrupt and powerful in an all-out battle between the haves and have-nots.

Hey Sam I like your idea. it makes for a thrilling story. Maybe you could say as much with fewer words. Cheers.
on After the boyfriend lost his memory because of a brain surgery,the girlfriend must pretend to get know the boy again for keep their relationship.

Good logline Weize, it's got all the makings of an intriguing story. Maybe you could introduce the boyfriend as 'a young man' and the girlfriends name eg. , Joanne, his girlfriend.... Cheers
on After the boyfriend lost his memory because of a brain surgery,the girlfriend must pretend to get know the boy again for keep their relationship.

Hey Weize, I like your logline. It sets up for an interesting story. I can only suggest a couple of minor changes: After a young man lost his memory because of brain surgery, (name), his girl friend, must pretend to…