MAlexander82

Penpusher · 57 points

243 points to Logliner

2 loglines
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Is this a valid log line? Or is it too vague and too long?

March 27, 2019
Is this a valid log line? Or is it too vague?

March 26, 2019

on After a succesful hotel owner and sunnyboy is infected by a strange virus that turns him into a killing and raping beast when he smells women who have their fertile days, he leaves his job and family and moves to a mountain cabin in order to not hurt anyone, but things get complicated when a young female student seeks shelter from a snowstorm at his cabin.

I may be wrong here since I'm kind of new to this but I feel this log line is too wordy and exceeds more than 25 words as per a log line should be. I do like the premise --…