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After tipping off police to his brother’s latest heist, a torn man must struggle to escape the consequences while keeping the loot; but when his brother is released on bail, he must learn where his true loyalty lies before losing the people most dear to him.

August 25, 2015

on After gaining superpowers, a group of clumsy and incompetent young adults set out to become the world?s first supervillains, but must first gain control over their city from the corrupt, but powerful superheroes who protect it.

My first critique, so take it with a grain of salt. Sounds great on the surface but who am I meant to care about in this story? The Supervillains? (Antiheros) Isn't a hero's value measured in the might and/or cunning…