Louise Weihart
90 points
- 6 loglines
- 43 reviews
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Hi there I think D Forde is also same old lol but 'deeper and denser" too haha They meet in the city where we show him as the fish out of water and then she gets in the truck and…
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Thanks Nir, I think it is definitely time for me to attend one of your analysis meetups :-)
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Hi guys, thank you all so much for your comments. It's given me lots to think about. Russell, you?re right ? 90-year-olds do fall in love! Why her specifically? I have some corny ideas about kismet moments and reminders of…
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Looks like 'the perfect logline' to me. Do we need a flaw? Is writer's block a flaw?
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Ahhh well, now that's SHAKESPEARE you are talking about lol :-)
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Thanks guys. Really grateful for all your feedback. It's very inspiring and encouraging :-)
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Jeez Tony! :-) I just read an article about having a big surprise at the end of Act 2 to propel the story into Act 3 ... and feel like I am reading the end of Act 2 here ...…
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Oh Yes! Of course, truck HAS TO break down/or he has to come across someone that has broken down! Had it in a very very early draft but not this one (go figure!). Would love to add more description in…
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I love you guys!!! :-) dpg .... an opposite to D Forde could be as corny as the 'overseas assignment' ... i think what I am really missing here is an interesting, uncontrived [is that a word?] ticking clock. Richiev:…
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Not yet .. but for the purposes of this .. how about ... When a shy long-haul truck driver falls for a city writer online, he must cross more than the outback to win her heart before she accepts an…
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Thank you SO much guys! As you know I have been working on this for months and months. Thanks to you and feedback from meetups in sydney as well as from Karel Segers, I think I am very close now…
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on in order to love his wife, a man must have affairs.
It's not a 'logline' but it gets the attention. What kind of loser is this 'man'? Either he is a complete nobody or he has serious issues that prevent him from having a relationship with his wife. Or, perhaps is… -
When a school nerd is given the lead role in the end-of-year play, she must overcome her desire to be popular to out the rapist living beneath the stage ....????? yes, you definitely need one protagonist
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This is just the type of story I would love. There are a couple of things missing in the logline though and the main character needs to have a more active 'voice'. I'am assuming the widow is the main character?…
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Intriguing so far ... But, when this happens to him, what does he have to do (what is his goal?), what is the action (what will he be doing to achieve this goal?), what does he need to learn or…
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Nothing like that in this case. A strange soul connection and the first time they speak they learn that they have both lost their first loves and aren't with the people they should have been with. Anyway, shared the logline…
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I think this could make for a very interesting film around housing shortages etc. But, you need to focus it around specific characters. You need a main character who has a goal after something happens to him/her. Is the main…
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That I think is a universal million-dollar question...... What is the psychological button that makes people 'fall in love' rather than embark on a relationship with solid foundations that becomes love? In this case, well I don't know. Initially it's…
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Thanks so much, guys. How wonderful that technology allows us to meet amazing people we would otherwise never be able to :-) Really appreciate all the comments and your faith in the 'true' story dpg - let's see if I…
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on A group of friends strive to find the silver lining in their lives without losing their minds.
Yes, and you will need one main character, and an inciting incident - what happens to him/her that sets this journey in motion. What is the 'silver lining'? Why will they lose their minds if they don't find it?