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After his fiance calls off their wedding, Tony has numerous sexual encounters. One encounter with a mob boss's girlfriend send him out of town to hide with his best friend on an island full of women, but not the kind of women they seek. The island is a nunnery!

March 3, 2013

on While undercover, an earnest detective falls in love with a criminal. But when he aides her during a bust, the pair fight to escape the country together.

This sounds similar to the Bourne movies. I'm not sure if I would be rooting for a cop and a criminal to get out of the country alive unless one of them had a redeeming quality. Is there something else…
on After his fiance calls off their wedding, Tony has numerous sexual encounters. One encounter with a mob boss's girlfriend send him out of town to hide with his best friend on an island full of women, but not the kind of women they seek. The island is a nunnery!

Thanks for the feedback! I really appreciate it. American Pie meets Sister Act is a good example of what I was trying to convey. It might be a little more like Harold and Kumar meets Forgetting Sarah Marshall. (Where the…
on Three fathers learn of their teenage daughters? pact to lose their virginity on prom night and band together to stop them.

I would probably see this movie. I think this logline works well because I envisioned three comedic actors in the roles - if we can picture it, it must be good! :)
on After watching his parents being brutally murdered, a young boy finds a magical portal to an alien planet, where he must learn their ways so he can avenge their deaths.

I like the idea about the boy avenging the death of his parents. If the aliens came to Earth to kill his parents, why wouldn't the aliens maybe realize they left one behind? Maybe they come back to kill him…

After his fiance calls off their wedding, Tony has numerous sexual encounters. One encounter with a mob boss's girlfriend send him out of town to hide with his best friend on an island full of women, but not the kind of women they seek. The island is a nunnery!