LincWilder

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A corrupt record producer steals hit songs from musicians in the future and uses them in the past to create musical legends out of nobodies.

December 17, 2013

on A corrupt record producer steals hit songs from musicians in the future and uses them in the past to create musical legends out of nobodies.

She's in on the heist until she discovers, quite by accident, who the real artist is. She was cool with the plot when she thought it was just some nobody she'd never heard of and maybe hadn't even been born…
on A corrupt record producer steals hit songs from musicians in the future and uses them in the past to create musical legends out of nobodies.

Here's a second pass from the opposite POV. "She stole her daughter's songs in the future and recorded them in the past as her own, but now must fix everything by facing the corrupt record producer who made it all…
on A corrupt record producer steals hit songs from musicians in the future and uses them in the past to create musical legends out of nobodies.

Awesome. That's a great call. The story does have a couple of victims the audience will root for, and will in fact root against the corrupt record producer. I'm going to get to work on this from the victims' POV…
on Able to wink only, paralyzed, but slowly recovering man agrees to sexual plays with a jealous nurse, but now he has to fight his helplessness, as he must stop her before she kills him and his family.

There's information in the logline that distracts from the premise, which, if I've read it correctly, is this: A temporarily paralyzed man on the mend must fight his sense of helplessness to stop his mentally unstable nurse from killing him…
on At the death of their mother three siblings undertake the journey to bury there mother and put her estate in order, but when they meet their long awaited soul mates they must learn that the path of pain leads to hope and joy before they loose this opportunity to the sorrow that engulfs them.

Three siblings embark on a on a journey of pain and self discovery as they bury their mother and set her affairs in order. I like the prospects of the story contained in your logline. Self discovery spurred by pain…
on A man planning to commit suicide becomes the soul survivor of a commercial jet airline crash plus the investigations number one suspect as a terrorist involved in bringing the flight down but most importantly he is reborn, discovering the things in life he previously thought of no value: love, empathy & revolution.

I like this because we don't know if he is a repentant terrorist or just a regular Joe who's finding reasons to live.

A corrupt record producer steals hit songs from musicians in the future and uses them in the past to create musical legends out of nobodies.