Lexington101

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on A guilt ridden hacker sets about repaying the damage he caused with his hacking.

What is the result of his action (repaying the damage he caused) ? Does: this set into motion a series of events that are beyond his control, he realizes his true purpose in life, discovers his long lost son... What…
on The global rise of demonic possessions brings together five exorcists from different faiths to combat an evil unlike any they have ever encountered.

I agree with Richiev, Further, as you mention 'different Faiths' I'm expecting a preview of some payoff, do they have to compromise to work together? Does the combination of faith make them stronger? "Five faiths are better than one!"
on After a shadow figure haunts his son, an impulsive man embarks on a journey to his childhood home to reconnect with his violent father and avoid passing on generational trauma.

This is good, but what I would like to see cleared up is the ' shadow figure haunts his son' how does this fit into the rest of the story? Does it come back that the father knows who this…
on A penniless single father takes a night job monitoring the cities CCTV, but fears he is losing his sanity when strange apparitions begin appearing on the monitors before him.

How does he deal with this? Does no one believe him. Does one person believe him now it's us against the world? What is the follow through?
on Acting in concert, birds start attacking people for no apparent reason.

What's the result?