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When slobby Jim and well-groomed Leo move into student housing together, their initial personality clash evolves into an unlikely friendship as they share the triumphs and humiliations of life in Sydney.

February 1, 2015

on Harlow Reeve, an orphaned teenager becomes aware of her teleportation abilities when she looks into her parents past. Social Media discloses her secret, when she is caught on camera, the world suddenly starts to become aware of her divergence

I am missing a clear sense of the character's goal. I can see the obstacle though, and it is an interesting idea. Perhaps re-think you're wording of the 'social media discloses it' part. Social media isn't an active person or…