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When a tsunami wipes out the island where a villainous pirate?s treasure is buried, he must turn to more conventional methods to fund his retirement.
Thanks for the reviews, quite helpful. Richie, I like the version you came up with, I don't think I could improve on it much. I'll keep practicing.
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When a young psychic girl becomes the victim of abuse she must use her ethereal powers to stop the horror and find a path to normality.
I agree, this logline is too vague, but I find the concept interesting and hope you post a revised version.
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After discovering his friend has joined the illuminati in order to become a famous rapper, a timid pothead must go undercover as an aspiring actor, in order to infiltrate and disband the secret society, and in doing so learns that in order to defeat the outside forces of the world, he must first defeat his own ego.
Agree with the above reviews. My main question was, why does the protag want to stop his friend become a famous rapper and how does posing as an aspiring actor allow him to infiltrate the organisation?
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The hunt for a spy takes a twist when an innocent bystander in a public park is mistaken for a government agent. (short film)
Agreeing with the previous reviews, my first question was who is the main character. I'm a fan of spy movies in general, so good luck!
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When a self-doubting boxer is offered a shot at the heavyweight title of the world, he must fight the fear inside to win the battle in the ring. (Rocky)
Great feedback dpg and nir shelter.? Plenty of helpful insights for me to think about.
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A drunk, homeless, hopeless man wanders around the streets of Los Angeles, California. One day, he catches a beautiful homeless woman buying food for her son with the only $5 she receives from a little boy. The homeless man is inspired by this act and starts building a hot chocolate station with the few dollars he obtains in one day to people in the cold. He sells hundreds of hot chocolates until Summer comes. The man must make lemonade but there are no lemons in Los Angeles. He can’t afford a plane and doesn’t have a car.
Interesting concept, but as a logline, I found this way too long and hard to follow.
