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A reluctant psychic has a near death experience and learns that karmic strands will continue to hold her and everyone she knows trapped in the same life experiences for eternity unless she can overcome her narcissistic mother’s attempts to keep her powerless and is willing to use her abilities to see the past, present and future to finally free everyone’s souls.
A reluctant psychic’s near death experience reveals that soul families are trapped in karmic loops and unless she finds the strength to confront her narcissistic mother by using her psychic abilities to find their past life mistakes they will remain…
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A reluctant psychic has a near death experience and learns that karmic strands will continue to hold her and everyone she knows trapped in the same life experiences for eternity unless she can overcome her narcissistic mother’s attempts to keep her powerless and is willing to use her abilities to see the past, present and future to finally free everyone’s souls.
Thanks!! I like it!!
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A reluctant psychic has a near death experience and learns that karmic strands will continue to hold her and everyone she knows trapped in the same life experiences for eternity unless she can overcome her narcissistic mother’s attempts to keep her powerless and is willing to use her abilities to see the past, present and future to finally free everyone’s souls.
thank you!
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When she gets the approval for making her first film on the script she has stolen or adapted from the pages of a shredded diary from a dilapidated library, she finds out that whoever from the cast and crew finishes reading it dies mysteriously in the same manner as in the script and diary. The script is already circulated online to all and whoever reads the first line could not put it down until finishes it.
I am not good at this stuff but...I was toying around with these ideas. When a novice filmmaker uses a stolen script for her first project, the cast and crew fall prey to the same manner of death they’ve read;…
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After a NDE a social media executive weighted with the ability to see past lives and now tasked with healing her “soul family” uses her position to embed herself in the lives of those around her to circumvent karma that foreshadows current life situations that could tragically repeat past life patterns.
I"m not shooting for great grammar...I'm attempting the impossible! Trying to get a spiritual concept into material world language..NDE is Near Death Experience..and it's another three words!! That event really isn't the story, it's the inciting incident that starts her…
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After a NDE a social media executive weighted with the ability to see past lives and now tasked with healing her “soul family” uses her position to embed herself in the lives of those around her to circumvent karma that foreshadows current life situations that could tragically repeat past life patterns.
ha ha...I knew that NDE would be a killer... yes, this is "my" story...loosely.. I do readings for people and really want us to start viewing one another with a little more compassion and try to think beyond "this moment"…
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A despondent social media planner weighted with a newfound ability to see past lives is forced to confront her karma and that of everyone she knows or remain condemned to repeat their same mistakes for an eternity.
is this closer? After a NDE a social media executive weighted with the ability to see past lives and now tasked with healing her “soul family” uses her position to embed herself in the lives of those around her to…
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A despondent social media planner weighted with a newfound ability to see past lives is forced to confront her karma and that of everyone she knows or remain condemned to repeat their same mistakes for an eternity.
is this any closer? After a NDE a social media executive weighted with the ability to see past lives and now tasked with healing her “soul family” uses her position to embed herself in the lives of those around her…
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An aging drug addict’s life changed when his granddaughter who aged out of foster care comes for a visit.
The Lies Between Us-Nice title so is the granddaughter the antagonist (there cuz no place to go but hates him?) or is it his addiction (still using vs. sober?). An aging addict's life is thrown into further disarray when his…
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An aging drug addict’s life changed when his granddaughter who aged out of foster care comes for a visit.
wouldn't you want to put in stakes? such as.. fights to get clean so he can prove he is the mentor she's never had but learns to need. I am learning along with ya...so...not sure but seems like there needs…
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A despondent social media planner weighted with a newfound ability to see past lives is forced to confront her karma and that of everyone she knows or remain condemned to repeat their same mistakes for an eternity.
thank you, this all helps a great deal.
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A despondent social media planner weighted with a newfound ability to see past lives is forced to confront her karma and that of everyone she knows or remain condemned to repeat their same mistakes for an eternity.
very clear help, thank you very much.
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After a near-death experience awakens a hopeless woman’s power to see peoples karmic past, she realizes their fates are intertwined and in order to release everyone from impending life destroying behaviors she must overcome her own insecurities while battling her abusive and manipulative mother.
the "problem" if you will is that what I am doing is more esoteric in nature. I want to use words like "karma" and say she is a Chimera and that in order to help people from repeating the same…
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After a near-death experience awakens a hopeless woman’s power to see peoples karmic past, she realizes their fates are intertwined and in order to release everyone from impending life destroying behaviors she must overcome her own insecurities while battling her abusive and manipulative mother.
your help is VERY MUCH APPRECIATED. thank you DarkHorse.
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After five years of wrongful imprisonment in the Space Justice Federations (SJF) penal colony, Instead of walking free and into the arms of his wife, ex SJF cop Taylor must outwit a malfunctioning, psychotic, shape shifting android that is using prisoners to re-enact macabre scenes from old horror movies to gain his freedom.
2. On the day of his discharge, after serving five years wrongful imprisonment by the Space Justice Federation (SJF), SJF cop Taylor should be a free man. Instead of walking into the waiting arms of his wife,Taylor finds a malfunctioning, psychotic, shape shifting android that is using prisoners to re-enact macabre scenes from old horror movies stands between him and this reunion .
sorry, I reread and saw what you did....that said, I know you can make this more impactful by making it more lean. After wrongful imprisonment a now free man is still being kept from his family by a shapeshifting droid…
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After five years of wrongful imprisonment in the Space Justice Federations (SJF) penal colony, Instead of walking free and into the arms of his wife, ex SJF cop Taylor must outwit a malfunctioning, psychotic, shape shifting android that is using prisoners to re-enact macabre scenes from old horror movies to gain his freedom.
2. On the day of his discharge, after serving five years wrongful imprisonment by the Space Justice Federation (SJF), SJF cop Taylor should be a free man. Instead of walking into the waiting arms of his wife,Taylor finds a malfunctioning, psychotic, shape shifting android that is using prisoners to re-enact macabre scenes from old horror movies stands between him and this reunion .
this is a synopsis, not a logline. Logline's say all of that in one or two sentences :-)
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Brutalized his entire life by an evil, racist, brutal police force, a homeless man commits suicide, resurrects as Christ the Lord, and takes revenge against a homicidal police force.
some dude who was "wronged" not wrong.
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Brutalized his entire life by an evil, racist, brutal police force, a homeless man commits suicide, resurrects as Christ the Lord, and takes revenge against a homicidal police force.
I just can't see a Christ type being, being vengeful and a killer. You don't raise to that level of consciousness by being a crazy killing person...then half of humanity would be "Christ the Lord" energies. Christ consciousness is about…
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After the eccentric field reporter she’s been ordered to keep sober falls off the wagon, a camera shy PA must over come her case of Tourettes in order to bring back a huge story or lose her job.
I think it states everything one needs to know about the story. it shows there will be a mess to deal with and a challenged protagonist who needs to clean everything up, even when they're own life could be quite…
