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While on an extermination mission, Claudia finds her 8 yr old brother orphaned and marked for death. She defects to get him to a rumored safe haven if they can make it? in time. Big thanks to Cynosurer for the feedback

December 7, 2012
The Collection is military faction that enslaves those not born into their ranks and exterminates those who?ve tried to escape. While serving the resistance Claudia returns to her hometown to find her brother Deitrich, orphaned and alone. She deserts the command to take him to a rumored safe heaven, but now she must avoid capture from both the collection and the resistance force.

December 6, 2012
Corey Mann a cat suit wearing anime obsessive gives the comic that he wrote to a girl thinking that she will pass it on to the publisher she works for. When he finds his comic in the trash, and he is kicked out of school he questions whether or not his dream of moving to japan is realistic

September 16, 2012

on The Collection is military faction that enslaves those not born into their ranks and exterminates those who?ve tried to escape. While serving the resistance Claudia returns to her hometown to find her brother Deitrich, orphaned and alone. She deserts the command to take him to a rumored safe heaven, but now she must avoid capture from both the collection and the resistance force.

Your edit made me think of something. What if she is apart of the Collection and finds her brother marked for extermination and defects from the collection?
on Corey Mann a cat suit wearing anime obsessive gives the comic that he wrote to a girl thinking that she will pass it on to the publisher she works for. When he finds his comic in the trash, and he is kicked out of school he questions whether or not his dream of moving to japan is realistic

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on A person learns that he is all life on earth and everything that ever was. He gets explained that in this universe he is everyone. "Real people" with their own universe, can't meet him because they are in a different universe.

The concept if very interesting. I feel like you should work out a character and an inciting incident. Maybe his universe is populated by fake people and the stale interactions between him and his projections make him board until he…