Keesey

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on When a school child is killed in a botched kidnapping case, a young superhero decides to retire, but her long-lost nemesis reappears–an evil superhero who also happens to be her brother.

Just wanna say first that are my reactions and other people's mileage may vary. Just saying "child" would grab me more than "school child." The causality of the botched case to the retirement is there, but could be stronger and…
on When a descendant of Cain commits murder, the statue of Cain becomes alive to exact revenge, and the killer is…A child!

You have me with bringing in "Cain" but the rest makes me question. My first response was aren't we all children of Cain (within the scope of that story)? Cain, Able, and possibly Seth were the children of Adam and…