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When a nerdy guy, who no one would like to date, is pranked , he creates using AI and robotics the hottest girl ever existed in the universe and programs it to date him , surprising and shocking everyone.
What are the stakes? Does this character have an arc, or do they just get a robot gf and live happily ever after? It'd be best to think about the consequences more when it comes to making artificial intelligence to…
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A single girl living in a future world where extreme individualism becomes the core ideology of society, suddenly discovers that she is pregnant one day and decides to have an abortion. From then on, she developed new emotions, gradually realized the evil of the society in which she lived and became extremely depressed.
When a young woman undergoes an abortion set in the future, she must triumph over the harsh ideologies held by her family and friends.
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When a single father attempts to recreate an idyllic childhood for his son through his beloved video game, a spark of rebellion from the boy compels him to face the harsh reality of their generational divide.
Thank you for your feedback. I'm currently working on creating a dramatic event to intensify the conflict. The distant relationship between the divorced father and his son is already established. This story is intentionally concise, as it's being developed as…
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When a single father attempts to recreate an idyllic childhood for his son through his beloved video game, a spark of rebellion from the boy compels him to face the harsh reality of their generational divide.
Great question. The story mainly focuses on parents imposing their preferred upbringing on their children, be it through religion, music, sports, or video games. I envision the father reacting by confronting his son, expressing his concern that the son wouldn't…
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When attending a brutal dance audition, a meticulous dancer must break free from conformity, unleashing her authentic individuality to claim the elusive path to success.
Good job Amy! I think all we want to know as readers is how the audition will be brutal. Like physically or mentally? I like that line "unleashing her authentic individuality," it's like showcasing a style of dance within a…
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When a lonely young girl connects with an online friend who turns out to be the past version of her deceased best friend’s mother, they must collaborate across different time periods to change their intertwined destinies and rewrite a tragic fate.
I like the authenticity of this idea of conversing with the deceased through this line of connection. What is unclear to me is what is their collaboration to change the past? Would it be better to potentially have the best…
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A middle-aged man’s obsession with storytelling traps him in a mystical world of his own creation, where he must navigate dangerous obstacles and confront his deepest fears in order to escape. With the guidance of a wise owl, Cameron discovers that the only way out is to confront the darker aspects of his imagination and find the courage to embrace reality once again
When an outlandish, yet apprehensive man traverses through a foreign reality, he must get the better of his fears with the help of a cunning owl, hoping to return to the reality he left.
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An artist down on his luck sees his roommate about to use the last of the peanut butter, a great battle of hilarity and hijinks ensues where he must fight for the right to claim the nut spread as his own
Nice work Jacob!!!
