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on When an illegal immigrant kills her sister, a misunderstood witch must stop the culprit from escaping back to her own land without paying for her crime.

A good old revenge concept, one of my faves. An interesting hook too. It would make me curious to know more after reading this logline
on When two reckless young women witness a drug deal involving a well-respected social media star, they must expose the celebrity before they are killed.

The last part of the logline threw me a bit, not in an off putting way, more like there is a twist in there somewhere that makes me want to read it. Still a bit of fine line though, you…