Birdman

Penpusher · 66 points

234 points to Logliner

on An amnesiac warrior woman with a mysterious, magical tattoo that compels her to do things against her will teams up with a band of eccentric comrades on a quest to uncover the secret of her markings.

You could make her act upon the discovery of what the tattoo makes her do, that would make her proactive?
on A woman and a man meet and fall in love in their dreams. They are a part of an experimental program that’s getting canceled. They must find a way to meet in person before their connection is gone, if it was ever real.?

Interesting concept, I like it! Who is the protagonist? The man or woman. Personally I would add some extra twist regarding the dreaming/reality. A Lonely woman finds lover in dream through an experimental dreamlab, she search a way to connect…
on After his wife and childhood dies unexpectedly from an illness, a Marine gains the ability to time travel so that he can remember all the times he spent with her.

If he can timetravel, how is this related to getting memories back? If he does timetravel he?ll be physically there. Does he needs memories or physically be there? Depending on that : timetravel or something else? And. I guess the…