Jason Kesse

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1 points to Penpusher

on Tired of being called crazy, a mother haunted by the ghost of her child stumbles into a sinister form of therapy from a group of deranged women.

As I began reading the logline, I had to keep on reading it, due to my curiousity of what could this "sinister form of therapy" could be which is good. It means you've grabbed my attention from the start. Elements…
on A disgraced scientist sends a message into a blackhole, never expecting the terrifying message it sends back, now he has just days to prove to the world that this time he is right.

I would trim your logline, deleting the last half, that starts with the word now. Leaves the reader wanting more, and is intrigued in what the message has told him. Overall, good work.