JJQUINTANA

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on In a single year, a guardian haunted by irrational horrors must rebuild a broken world and find the cure to save the princess from her fatal destiny.

Hi NavCR and thanks for your comments on my logline. I read yours. My first reaction is that it may feel a little vague. First: Why in a single year? He has a due date - if so, it may…
on A hot- tempered uncle accidentally slaps a nagging woman over an ownership of a compound wall, issue soon spirals into a building-wide sensationalised political circus of gossip, mockery, legalities, and indifference.

Varnan, I think your logline describes that this is a small incident that grows into a major scandal. It confuses me the word "uncle" because it doesn't tell me enough or leads me to guess that there's a nice or…
on ‘An Executive Business man arrives home at two in the morning, to the worry of his daughter, who finds he has not come home quite the same.’

Hi Julian. I'm new here and this is my very first review :-) I feel that you can make this one a little more intriguing. I see that this will be a horror story, but i didnt get the feeling…