jjbuterbaugh

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When a down on his luck handyman tricks a wealthy amnesiac into believing that she's his wife, he must find a way to be honest, and she must learn to be a housewife and mother, as they fall in love.

May 28, 2013

on When a down on his luck handyman tricks a wealthy amnesiac into believing that she's his wife, he must find a way to be honest, and she must learn to be a housewife and mother, as they fall in love.

That's why I posted it in the "Classics" section.
on A meticulous hitman unwittingly becomes a tool in a complex scheme of revenge by a woman he regards as nothing more than a one night stand.

I dig this. You could either go Noir or Action with it. It has a lot of potential... I think you need to make the protagonist more active. I read your original logline, as well as your revision. The revised…