James Walker

Recent reviews

• on A gripping tale of family secrets, betrayal, and unbreakable bonds, Detective Carin Trimble is on a quest to untangle a web hints left by her late mother.

  I mean it has me intrigued, but without more information how is this different to any other detective story? What are the family secrets? What is in the web of hints? Loglines are used to inform people on the entire…

• on Thee Unknown God – Some believe We are One with all there is, connected to the spiritual realms, forces of Nature, animals and are born to do good unto others. But, some choose a dark path and when the darkness of the God of War and Roman Empire grows strong, what brings those of the Oneness, three women and a man together to rise up against them?

  I love the world you've created and the different points of conflict that you've developed. Who is the main character? I've also learnt that loglines aren't normally used to create mystery, and shouldn't be a question. This is definitely a…

• on What’s wrong with these loglines? I can only view three at a time

  Try to use a different browser. I had the same issue while using safari, but now on Chrome I can scroll through a bunch of loglines

• on On a farm in the Portuguese countryside, two Indostanic immigrants with a forbidden attraction become the suspects after the mysterious death of their overbearing female boss. Without papers and pursued by the locals, they take refuge in the container where they live.

  I really like the different components of world-building, plot development, and the stakes. Who is the main character? Who's POV are we using?