The Doctor

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A reclusive writer discovers the murders in her novels are becoming reality before they hit the shelves and must work with a suspicious FBI agent to find the killer and clear her name.

November 21, 2012
Suffering heart damage after a weapons sale is ambushed by terrorsists, a military industrialist/ playboy builds a hi-tech armoured suit to save his own life and protect his company from the people he trusts.

September 14, 2012
When a doctor is framed and wrongly convicted of killing his wife, he must escape his so called "justice" and find the true killer, the mysterious one-armed man, in order to clear his name.

August 15, 2012
When young hot-shot District Attorney becomes Gotham's white knight in the wake of the Batman's assault on crime; the the mafia turn in desperation to the chaos loving 'Joker' who offers to cleanse the city of the symbols they believe in and prove that whatever doesn't kill you simply makes you… Stranger.

August 15, 2012
When a small club owner finds out his wife is cheating with one of his young bartenders, he hires a conniving hitman and we discover that in Texas, nothing is simple…

August 1, 2012

on Suffering heart damage after a weapons sale is ambushed by terrorsists, a military industrialist/ playboy builds a hi-tech armoured suit to save his own life and protect his company from the people he trusts.

Hmm, yes I assumed that "playboy" would indicate his selfishness as his character flaw but it could be clearer. I keep reading conflicting loglines that often suggest being open ended is good but if clarity is key then I should…
on A now broken doctor is sentenced to death for his wifes murder, forced to reassess his morals, he escapes now as the clock ticks he must survive to prove his innocence.

That's good man. Short and sweet, nice and clear, easy to read like it should be. I think you're supposed to switch around where you've entered the logline and title though ;)
on A film director, mentally driven to the edge, fires his ego-maniacal narrator, a pixy, who later manipulates his movie for her own personal gain. — or so it would seem.

I really like this. I was captivated by the concept, the twist and the archetypal characters. I got a bit confused when I got to the "or so it would seem" but without that it's a very strange but interesting…
on When a small club owner finds out his wife is cheating with one of his young bartenders, he hires a conniving hitman and we discover that in Texas, nothing is simple…

Thanks gman, interesting points! I'm not sure about the club, I kind of feel it establishes a connection to the bartender which is nice. I really see what you mean about the punchline missing a joke, I tried to avoid…