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Recent reviews

• on An event in a young Indian girl Meena, who now lives in America, triggers memories of her maid Radha, who brought her up into the teens when the family lived in Southern India in the 1980's. The story follows the relationship between Meena and Radha from her childhood to young adulthood in the broader social and hierarchical context built around domestic help in India.

  If you're writing more than one sentence, it isn't a log line...

• on Two recently unemployed nerds get more than they ask for when they fake a UFO encounter to generate publicity for their start-up business.

  I really like this idea. It leaves a lot to the imagination, but that's the fun part! I agree that you need to reveal more about their profession. By doing so it may even get people laughing, even at this…

• on A young couple find themselves stranded in the Great Karoo desert only to find refuge in the forgotten Victorian village that is haunted by more than just ghosts.

  Thanks for the response. I agree it could be tighter. Your feedback is really helpful. Thanks! ;-)

• on Stolen by mad scientists, Henrietta?s telekinetic brain must reconcile with her blossoming body to defeat a cyborg octopus and win back her friends.

  This sounds like a fun 3D animation, or even a cool series. Really promising idea. :-)