jacqueline

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on A player afraid of commitments must save the girl he love when she gets kidnapped by one of his other girlfriends

Hello :) I like your log line. Not much i can comment about. Maybe you should try to get some positiv stakes in there. What happens if he succeeds? The girl lives, something more? You could try saying something more…
on After failing his final mission to receive his wings and graduate to guardianship, an angel must work with his client – a depressed mime ? to help him discover reasons to continue living and to fulfill his own quest of becoming a guardian angel.

Sounds intriguing When i read it the first time i was a bit confused about who was what and who's the MC. Maybe something you can be more specific about. Why does the MC have to work with his client?…