Ivy_Waters

Recent reviews

• on FAKING THE BAND After concocting a scheme to achieve popularity and infamy a junior high rock band is forced to confront the fact they can?t play a single song when a spiteful teacher plans to expose their charade by awarding them a spot in the schools annual variety show.

  I like the concept. Perhaps try something like this ?"A middle school rock band is awarded a coveted spot in the school's variety show, only the band is a total fake. Now they must learn to play or face the…

• on STRANGER TO BLUE WATER – When the sheltered daughter of a disabled coal miner falls for a Trinidadian man passing through town on a sales call , she’s torn between staying in the rinky dead end pennsylvania borough caring for her crippled racist dad or leaving with her dark mysterious lover on an adventure in the Caribbean.

  I can clearly understand the emotional conflict in the story based on the information provided. ?Perhaps try something along the lines of " In a small town where racism is still hardwired in to the populace, a young woman questions…

• on When an LA homicide detective uncovers a corporate conspiracy to use clones as assassins and is framed for murder, she must track down her own duplicate to prove her innocence.

  This is very intriguing. ?Murder Mysteries are nothing new but the addition of a Sci-Fi element gives it something special. ?I am drawn the the character and can already get a sense of the desperation she might feel as she…