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While on assignment in Europe, a cut-throat US journalist and tomboy discovers she is the reincarnated queen of an ancient kingdom but must quickly come to terms with her new identity before facing enemies, determined to eliminate her and take the crown.

January 17, 2021
When the leader of the Assassination Cartel’s grandson is killed during a raid authorized by the American President, the semi-retired leader invokes an ancient vengeance that will wipe out the president’s seed from the earth

December 21, 2020
Four desperate friends strive to live up to the promise they made to each other in their teens to Only marry rich men, Only have two children and Only live in mansions before they turn thirty, but decades later, they find that life cannot be made to order

December 21, 2020
In a world where men carry at least one trimester of pregnancy, an anxious mother takes drastic steps including breaking laws to ensure that when it’s her accident-prone husband’s turn, the baby survives the experience.

December 6, 2020
After a talk show host smears the poor on TV, a woman who advocates for society’s invisible goes on the show to confront him then he physically assaults her, years later she struggles to help him when she discovers that he has become one of society’s invisible.

December 5, 2020

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on While on assignment in Europe, a cut-throat US journalist and tomboy discovers she is the reincarnated queen of an ancient kingdom but must quickly come to terms with her new identity before facing enemies, determined to eliminate her and take the crown.

I've modified it to include what she loses if she fails. Thanks again Rich!
on While on assignment in Europe, a cut-throat US journalist and tomboy discovers she is the reincarnated queen of an ancient kingdom but must quickly come to terms with her new identity before facing enemies, determined to eliminate her and take the crown.

LOL Rich @ "got more from the title than the logline". I must say, I didn't think constructing a good logline was this involved! :-) Let me know what you think about these versions. Which do you prefer?. Thank you.…
on When the leader of the Assassination Cartel’s grandson is killed during a raid authorized by the American President, the semi-retired leader invokes an ancient vengeance that will wipe out the president’s seed from the earth

Hi Craig, What do you think of this version of the logline?
on When the leader of the Assassination Cartel’s grandson is killed during a raid authorized by the American President, the semi-retired leader invokes an ancient vengeance that will wipe out the president’s seed from the earth

Hi Craig, What do you think of this version of the logline.
on When the leader of the Assassination Cartel’s grandson is killed during a raid authorized by the American President, the semi-retired leader invokes an ancient vengeance that will wipe out the president’s seed from the earth

Hello Rich, What do you think of this version?
on Four desperate friends strive to live up to the promise they made to each other in their teens to Only marry rich men, Only have two children and Only live in mansions before they turn thirty, but decades later, they find that life cannot be made to order

I always love your feedback Odie. It's most helpful. I'll get to work on it. Thank you very much. I wish you and your family a very Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays! Stay safe. Cheers.
on When the leader of the Assassination Cartel’s grandson is killed during a raid authorized by the American President, the semi-retired leader invokes an ancient vengeance that will wipe out the president’s seed from the earth

Thanks Rich for your comments. I will keep working on it using your feedback. Wishing you and your family a very Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays! Cheers.
on When the leader of the Assassination Cartel’s grandson is killed during a raid authorized by the American President, the semi-retired leader invokes an ancient vengeance that will wipe out the president’s seed from the earth

Thanks Craig for your comments. I will keep working on it using the feedback from you and Rich. Wishing you and your family a very Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays! Cheers.
on In a world where men carry at least one trimester of pregnancy, an anxious mother takes drastic steps including breaking laws to ensure that when it’s her accident-prone husband’s turn, the baby survives the experience.

Hello Odie, Sorry for the late reply. Thank you for your further comments on this logline. I really love your suggestion and I'll get to work on it. I must say that I'm happy to hear your wife got a…
on In a world where men carry at least one trimester of pregnancy, an anxious mother takes drastic steps including breaking laws to ensure that when it’s her accident-prone husband’s turn, the baby survives the experience.

Thank you Odie, for your comments. It’s not a role reversal but the couple actually physically share the pregnancy. At some point, he must carry the child. Hence why he is terrified and being accident prone, she must ensure that…
on In a world where men carry at least one trimester of pregnancy, an anxious mother takes drastic steps including breaking laws to ensure that when it’s her accident-prone husband’s turn, the baby survives the experience.

Thank you Odie, for your comments. It's not a role reversal but the couple actually physically share the pregnancy. At some point, he must carry the child. Hence why he is terrified and being accident prone, she must ensure that…
on After a talk show host smears the poor on TV, a woman who advocates for society’s invisible goes on the show to confront him then he physically assaults her, years later she struggles to help him when she discovers that he has become one of society’s invisible.

Thanks Richiev, Your comments are really insightful and give me food for thought. I appreciate your time.