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on When an avid lens collector takes a photo with a mysterious camera, he is captured in a murder he can only hope to escape.

Ok. After the help of all of those that posted on this one and with a little help from my partner, we revised the logline and? both feel it is a good fit. When a possessed camera converts an…
on When a selfish store clerk finds himself in the middle-ages, he clumsily awakens an ancient evil in an effort to return home; in doing so, he finds himself fighting armies of un-dead to not only save himself but humanity.

Revision: Unwittingly thrust into the middle ages, a selfish store clerk must retrieve the Necronomicon before the Army of Darkness to return home and save humanity. Full disclosure, I asked my English Major-Partner to help me with this. She can…