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on When dangerous robbers invade her remote country manor, a stubborn elderly widow must use her intimate knowledge of the building and her collection of ancient weaponry to fend them off.

Sounds like a cool movie Paul. What about the logline below? When robbers break into the house of a recently widowed old woman, she must use her intimate knowledge of the house and her collection of ancient weaponry to take…
on When a cyborg assassin is sent back through time to stop the future leader of the resistance from ever being born, the mother must stop the terminator in order to save the human race.

I think you should change the sentence "the mother must stop the terminator in order to save the human race", to? "the mother of the future resistance leader must stop the terminator in order to save the human race". This…