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Nearing the end of his parole and looking to put his criminal past behind him, an ex-con?s plans are derailed by the arrival of two former prison buddies, one with a bullet wound and the other with a plan to rob the local bank.
I think this is good - a lot of potential. Maybe you could get more specific than 'arrival'. What does this mean exactly? They come for a visit? To move in with him? This logline is still general enough that…
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When Tilly comes home she not only heals her ailing mother, but with her sewing machine, and haute couture style, transforms the women of the town in such a way that she gets sweet revenge on those who did her wrong. She also falls unexpectedly in love, which leads to her greatest loss and her most destructive deed.
I like the premise of the haute couture in a small town - something to work with there, but the rest is too wordy and vague. Who does she fall in love with? Destructive deed? You don't need to explain…
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Dr. Caitlin Steele is a relationship phobic, yet successful NYC sex therapist who is hired as a consultant to treat a League One London football club in the wake of recent scandals. Sparks fly when she meets team captain and womanizer, Ray Brunner, intent on bringing his club to a long awaited championship before his retirement and who wants nothing to do with an American therapist on his turf.
(Sorry, just realized I shouldn't have included their names, but I'm finding you can't edit these once they're posted, right?? ~cheers)
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A Janitor suffering from aquaphobia discovers he has the ability to control water. He must conquer his fear to save his fiance from a malevolent man who wants to see the world burn.
I think you start off with an interesting idea - a janitor with aquaphobia - but maybe you could push that a little further. Like what if he's a pool maintenance man who suddenly becomes aquaphobic? But then it gets…
