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Penpusher · 55 points
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- 4 reviews
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HI, Richiev! Great feedback. It is confusing and needs clarification, as does the script. Your questions and suggestions definitely help. Thank you!
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Hi! I am not too sure as to how to respond to a logline, so my apologies if my response is deemed inappropriate. The core of your idea is very appealing, as it conjures up imagery of a wonderful, magical…