Guillerson
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Very Interesting!! The historical references make a very strong movie, and is also very personal, the bodyguard has to do it for honor, revenge and guilty, love that. Also i think movies that relay so well on a revenge are…
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i love comedies about that kind on "leaders" i dont know if you are italian but in my country, Spain, we had censorship till the 70's, and the only way to critizase was comedy, comedy not about the dictator but…
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If these is for a pilot tv show, are you giving us the logline of the pilot or the season? It would help, as Richiev said before, a hint about how to be a werecat can help to save the…
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what its putting the world in risk? maybe the movie is about confront that specific conflict, Wich is the major event? Also if the love story its not directly implicated in the conflict or the goal its the "B" story,…
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Thank you for the feedback! Thats very useful, it must be a short amount of time! Love the idea of the prosecuting attorney! It's very important in the story and it's other kind of enemy so the good guy must…
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Thank you very much for the feedback! variable, i always thought about the protagonist to be part of bullied ones, but its not clear in the logline. Now it also makes me think about that the protagonist could be some…
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why is she going to be the hero? wich are here stakes? If she wakes up in the future maybe she has less to lose than a person of that time.Maybe she can discover that the leader of the "bad…
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Im totally agree with dpg, that world could be interesting but the conflict needs to be something original. In Minority Report he has to discover why himself is going to kill somebody, thats a conflict unique in that world. Im…
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Hi! He has to heal his vision, but then? Is he going to confront the cannibal tribe? I think the blind issue is an obstacle not a goal, the goal could be to save the princess but what does he…
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