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After an altercation over some pocket change escalates, a failed actor inadvertently takes another man hostage and must now reach the public in order to avoid arrest.
How about this:In order to resolve a dispute over some pocket change, a talentless actor takes a man hostage and must find a way to get the angry crowd that has surrounded him on his side.
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A young impressionable man is called by a manipulative enchantress to rule a kingdom until he finds out how the previous ruler died and investigates everyone, thinking how he might be next and what it would mean for the kingdom if he dies.
How about this: After discovering the previous ruler was murdered, a?young impressionable man called by a manipulative enchantress to rule a kingdom must launch an investigation and avoid being the next casualty.
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A feeble and weak-kneed man must find a way out when he is forced to drive and help a criminal on the run, while being chased by the police who believes him to be an accomplice.
How about this: Over the course of one night, a meek nobody is taken hostage and forced to help a violent, apathetical criminal on a crime spree, while being chased by the police who believes him to be an accomplice.
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SHORT: When a bank robbery goes wrong, a naive and desperate young man has 3 hours to retrieve the stolen money in order to save his grandmother?s life, while being chased by the entire police force of his small town.
How about this ? When a bank robbery goes wrong and his partner is caught by the police with the bag of money, a naive and desperate young man has 3 hours to retrieve the stolen money in order to…
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SHORT: When a bank robbery goes wrong, a naive and desperate young man has 3 hours to retrieve the stolen money in order to save his grandmother?s life, while being chased by the entire police force of his small town.
Alternative:When an old lady falls sick and in desperate need of an operation, her delinquent grandson decides to rob a bank. Complications arise when the robbery goes wrong, leaving him with only 3 hours to retrieve the stolen money while…
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After being framed for the murder of two policemen, Peter, an inocent man with a criminal past, must fight to get his daughter back while running away from the revenge-driven police force and the angered population of the town that has been conditioned by the media to see him as a monster.
Clearly it is still not phrased properly, but the idea is to have a film about a manhunt and the main character's goal is to escape somehow, so he decides to leave the country. However, he wants to take his…
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After being framed for the murder of two policemen, Peter, an inocent man with a criminal past, must fight to get his daughter back while running away from the revenge-driven police force and the angered population of the town that has been conditioned by the media to see him as a monster.
Thank you for your comments.How about this?After accidentaly killing two policemen, Peter, an ex-convict trying to change his ways, must elude the revenge-driven police force and an angered population conditioned by the media in order?to get his daughter before leaving…
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Short Film:
After the Sun went out, the earth became a cold, dangerous and dark place and people avoid leaving the house in fear of the temperature, murderers and lack of oxygen. When a young girl, depressed by her parents disappearance, realizes her little sister has left, she must go out and find her before it's too late.
What do you think of this: "In a world with no sun, a girl obsessed with her parents disappearance must face her fear of the dark ?to rescue her sister from a cult who intends to sacrifice her to the…
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Short Film:
After the Sun went out, the earth became a cold, dangerous and dark place and people avoid leaving the house in fear of the temperature, murderers and lack of oxygen. When a young girl, depressed by her parents disappearance, realizes her little sister has left, she must go out and find her before it's too late.
Understood, thank you for all your help.
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Short Film:
After the Sun went out, the earth became a cold, dangerous and dark place and people avoid leaving the house in fear of the temperature, murderers and lack of oxygen. When a young girl, depressed by her parents disappearance, realizes her little sister has left, she must go out and find her before it's too late.
Nir Shelter, I agree with you. So what do you think of this log line: "In a dark and dangerous world with no sun and most of the people gone, a terrified young girl must find her sister before she…
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Short Film:
After the Sun went out, the earth became a cold, dangerous and dark place and people avoid leaving the house in fear of the temperature, murderers and lack of oxygen. When a young girl, depressed by her parents disappearance, realizes her little sister has left, she must go out and find her before it's too late.
Thank you for your comments. I've been reading about this possibility of the sun going out, and I'm not trying to start a fight here, but I've found that some experts say mankind would disappear when that started to happen,…
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A 45 year old poor family man is diagnosed with a leg disease for which he will need surgery and afterwards 3 months of rest. He must now choose between getting the surgery or keeping his job as a night guard to support his family.
Thank you for your comment, it gave me a whole different perspective on things. Do you have any ideas on how to raise the stakes ? Do you think it's possible by changing one of its parts or should I…
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When a Craigslist-swinging-meetup goes bad and the voyeruist find herself trapped with a serial killer, she must out-clever the killer before times-up as gagged-bate for the killer?s next victim.
The second part of your logline sounds a bit vague, maybe you could elaborate on that. What does the killer's next victim have that your protagonist needs to survive?
