glennpearl

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on Jesus Christ returns to earth with a sword, living under an alias, he does battle with the Devil to save his daughter’s soul.

The greatest story of all. . . Christ?s return. . . not sure you are going for an irreverent, comedic take, or a quasi-biblical story that would draw (some) evangelicals. . .? I like to get some idea of the…
on After an OCD-afflicted introvert finally gets a chance at true love with an inspiring woman who sees past her condition, jealousy over a casual friendship forces her to face the latent insecurities that threaten her chances.

Perhaps re-writing, being more specific about "gets and chance" and "latent insecurities," would better convey your story.? As it stands, I sort of want to see the film. I know that you are exploring OCD and relationships, but wondering if…