Francois Thoolen
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on A sleek female sports agent struggles to get her papers from the evils of this world and beyond.
I also think it's to abstract. It's better that you specify what you mean by the evils of this world. Good luck! -
You could shorten your logline by telling: The chef must obtain a magic cookbook to execute a dish pleasing to the emperor or else he and his entire staff will be beheaded