FlightOfThePan

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on An abstinent Christian dating coach's societal standing crumbles upon trying to win back the university whore he has impregnated.

The concept: A young man in university is a dating coach --but he's chosen abstinence for his own lifestyle. Think a marriage counselor --who's never been married. But, dating isn't explicitly sexual: he's teaching inept and awkward men who to…
on A flamboyantly ghetto man must care for his rich estranged grandmother as a live-in in her haunted house in this horror genre spoof.

Thanks for the input. The idea was actually for a funny short film, but I wanted to see what I would do wrong on a feature length logline. I agree the idea isn't strong enough to last 110 pages, but…