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on A laid-back man-child?s quest to get rich quick is disrupted when he becomes the legal guardian of a pugnacious twelve year old girl.

I think this could be really funny. I just have a question about your wording. A laid back man child's quest. Is it the laid back man's kid who wants him to be the legal guardian? Are there two kids?…
on An inhibited accountant who detest musicals struggles to remain sane when he wakes up in a world where everybody sing and dance.

I love every thing about this story. I would watch it if it were made into a movie.
on When an author encounters the characters he writes in the real world, creating a number of awkward and humorous moments, he must help them assimilate or return to the stories they belong in.

I love the idea of storybook characters in the real world. Like in the book Inkheart. My only suggestion would be don't say awkward and humorous...show it.