Elly Field

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The summer of 1978 will change a group of young ghost investigators lives forever ? they must solve the mystery at the heart of their rural seaside town and catch a villain with nothing more than their wits and chopper bikes all the while growing together as they grow up.

October 12, 2013

on A DJ for small nightclubs decides to help a new genre of music called electronic music and he starts a record company but does not recieve any credit for it.

I'm guessing this is biopic? Sounds from the context a bit like electronica is new...
on The summer of 1978 will change a group of young ghost investigators lives forever ? they must solve the mystery at the heart of their rural seaside town and catch a villain with nothing more than their wits and chopper bikes all the while growing together as they grow up.

Hi dcjohn Thanks for pointing that out - I think I am confusing people with the way this is worded so obviously need to rewrite drastically. The choppers I mention are the 1970s push bikes - these are effectively just…
on The summer of 1978 will change a group of young ghost investigators lives forever ? they must solve the mystery at the heart of their rural seaside town and catch a villain with nothing more than their wits and chopper bikes all the while growing together as they grow up.

Hi Richiev, it has definitely helped thank you! This is my first log line and I was really struggling to get myself across I think. I need to define more of my main story (at the moment my secondary plot…
on The summer of 1978 will change a group of young ghost investigators lives forever ? they must solve the mystery at the heart of their rural seaside town and catch a villain with nothing more than their wits and chopper bikes all the while growing together as they grow up.

Thanks for asking - the feel I am trying to convey is a Goonies type scenario - but more along the mystery solving front. Main inspiration to the characters is The Red Hand Gang..
on The summer of 1978 will change a group of young ghost investigators lives forever ? they must solve the mystery at the heart of their rural seaside town and catch a villain with nothing more than their wits and chopper bikes all the while growing together as they grow up.

Thanks Karel - this is my first log line so I appreciate your input. I think I was hoping the log line would help me cement some of the plot you have asked about lol. I do need to nail…
on After two boys disappear from an abandoned RAF fighter station – eighteen years apart – they find themselves back in time fighting for their country and flying for their lives during the Battle of Britain

I wonder if you need to be so time specific...maybe saying something like 'at separate times' you could avoid the break in the flow of your sentence?
on Hannibal and his cannibal crew plan the ultimate heist; Walt Disney's frozen head.

This is quite intriguing though, agree with the above but does make you want to know more!

The summer of 1978 will change a group of young ghost investigators lives forever ? they must solve the mystery at the heart of their rural seaside town and catch a villain with nothing more than their wits and chopper bikes all the while growing together as they grow up.