dutchlegend1486

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After the death of his wife, A confident salesman is sent to prison for assault and his children put in care, upon his release he enlist the help of his brother lawyer to regain custody but is he stable and will the children have bonded with the foster parents.

January 12, 2015
After the death of his wife, An expert salesman is sent to prison and his children put in to care. Upon his release, He and his confident lawyer brother will take on the courts for custody however will his disabled daughter and young son have adapted to their surroundings and be too little too late.

September 30, 2014
A veteran alcoholic detective enlists the help of a young inexperienced psychiatrist to catch a serial killer who is targeting the parents of abused children before the killer discovers the detective's dark family secret.

September 30, 2014
Suicidal and desperate for death, a young man travels to a house to remove the one element in his life that keeps him going so he can have his death wish fulfilled, his brother.

August 17, 2014
After the death of their baby, the young father believes he can still hear and see his baby however his wife does not share his hallucinations which will bring a brutal end to their relationship.

August 17, 2014
A detective turns to alcohol while battling to keep joint custody of his child however when an elusive serial killer comes on the scene leaving only a family photo as a clue, The detective will soon realise both situations ask the same question what is truly best for the child?

September 4, 2013
Sean Metcalfe is a family man first and salesman second. When a tragic car accident sets off a series of events, Sean will need to come up with the ultimate sales pitch to keep his family together.

August 25, 2013
When a man\'s world is shattered by a tragic accident, He will have to learn to be strong and fight or risk losing everything.

August 23, 2013

on Suicidal and desperate for death, a young man travels to a house to remove the one element in his life that keeps him going so he can have his death wish fulfilled, his brother.

The brother make his life worth living because of the happiness he feels when they are together however the majority of the time he is severely depressed as well as alone. Killing his brother he will end the conflict in…
on A detective turns to alcohol while battling to keep joint custody of his child however when an elusive serial killer comes on the scene leaving only a family photo as a clue, The detective will soon realise both situations ask the same question what is truly best for the child?

Thank you for your comment I'm still working on it, The photo is of the victim's family. When I said the serial killer comes on the scene I meant for it to be a catalyst for events which audience would…
on WWIII's survivors have been forced to go deep underground to reboot society. With resources running out and totalitarian rule building great discontent, our Rogue Group of government agents are tasked to explore the Earth's surface to determine if it is life-sustaining. What they find up above is far more frightening than anything they could have imagined.

I like the idea, All I would say is that it would need to be a bit shorter. Good Luck
on When Jacob, a genteel theater actor, becomes a mob boss through mistaken identity. He is forced to work with Mia a police detective, in order to incarcerate the notorious Big Bamzy and save his own life. This is a logline for the narrative of a 10 episode TV comedy series.

I really like the idea.
on A hipster quest for "transcendent" duck tacos is derailed when a failed chef turned health inspector closes the duck truck down.

this a very unusual story, I'm new to this but shouldn't there be a goal which he needs to achieve because he has been derailed.
on When a man\'s world is shattered by a tragic accident, He will have to learn to be strong and fight or risk losing everything.

This is my first screenplay and logline, so I am trying different ideas for the logline. I do believe that the dialogue, the events that happen due to the accident and how the audience will be able to connect with…
on When a man\'s world is shattered by a tragic accident, He will have to learn to be strong and fight or risk losing everything.

Thank you for your comment, I just didn't want to give too much away so the film would be more appealing.
on A carefree college student attempts to host a huge party for his friends during the initial days of a zombie outbreak.

It's unusual idea, would be worth reading some of the script. Good luck
on A young widow's son is kidnapped by a serial killer and will only be freed if she finishes his final murders and thus giving him an alibi.

It sounds like the film is coming to end before it's began.