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When a delusional shut-in discovers that his favorite webcam model has been kidnapped, he must utilize his detective skills to locate her before she becomes another victim of a rampant madman.
Again...thanks for all the feedback everyone.
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When a delusional shut-in discovers that his favorite webcam model has been kidnapped, he must utilize his detective skills to locate her before she becomes another victim of a rampant madman.
Actually, that's one of the scenes in my script. Him trying to convince the cops was one of my favorite scenes to write.
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When a delusional shut-in discovers that his favorite webcam model has been kidnapped, he must utilize his detective skills to locate her before she becomes another victim of a rampant madman.
OOOHHHH, that feels so much better.
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When a delusional shut-in discovers that his favorite webcam model has been kidnapped, he must utilize his detective skills to locate her before she becomes another victim of a rampant madman.
Unfortunately, I don't watch NCIS, so you'll have to fill me in.
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When a delusional shut-in discovers that his favorite webcam model has been kidnapped, he must utilize his detective skills to locate her before she becomes another victim of a rampant madman.
More along the lines of "Kick Ass".
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When a delusional shut-in discovers that his favorite webcam model has been kidnapped, he must utilize his detective skills to locate her before she becomes another victim of a rampant madman.
Appreciate the kind words man.
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When a delusional shut-in discovers that his favorite webcam model has been kidnapped, he must utilize his detective skills to locate her before she becomes another victim of a rampant madman.
Yeah, rampant madman is generic; I cringed a bit as wrote that. I'm struggling with a way of describing his antagonist.
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When a delusional shut-in discovers that his favorite webcam model has been kidnapped, he must utilize his detective skills to locate her before she becomes another victim of a rampant madman.
You guys gave me a lot more to think about (helpful in every sense). I wonder if "Socially-awkward shut-in" would work?
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When a delusional shut-in discovers that his favorite webcam model has been kidnapped, he must utilize his detective skills to locate her before she becomes another victim of a rampant madman.
Excellent line but my protagonist is nowhere near being that kind of man.
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When a delusional shut-in discovers that his favorite webcam model has been kidnapped, he must utilize his detective skills to locate her before she becomes another victim of a rampant madman.
He really has no skills....but he believes that he does. I'm trying to convey that point, but I'm not sure how to do so effectively.
