DrewHill407

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on An immortal alien race must come out of hiding on earth and reunite, when an ancient enemy threatens humanity.

This sounds disturbingly similar to my story...
on When a skeptic psychiatrist witnesses his pregnant wife being abducted by aliens, he teams up with his abductee patient in order to get her back.

Hi Drew, Maybe instead of just being vaguely "skeptical", the protagonist should be described as becoming dissalusioned with his dream job after endless abduction stories. Perhaps his wife mysteriously dissapears but he doesn't actually witness the abduction. Then, on wit's…