Douglas Horton

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After following a trail of clues that began with a cryptic E-mail, A tired middle-aged family man must enter a hidden world of supernatural mystery to save the soul of his childhood friend from an ancient secret society bent on hiding their existence at any cost.

May 10, 2014

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on After following a trail of clues that began with a cryptic E-mail, A tired middle-aged family man must enter a hidden world of supernatural mystery to save the soul of his childhood friend from an ancient secret society bent on hiding their existence at any cost.

Thanks guys! I think Luke nailed it!
on After following a trail of clues that began with a cryptic E-mail, A tired middle-aged family man must enter a hidden world of supernatural mystery to save the soul of his childhood friend from an ancient secret society bent on hiding their existence at any cost.

Richiev first off, thanks for responding! I'm very new at log lines and I can tell I have a long way to go! your revision tells me that I haven't really conveyed what the story is about at all. a…