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on When a priest is faced with the choice to either save his nieces life or uphold the laws of his religion the devil himself appears to tell him that everything he thought he knew about god and the devil was a lie to begin with.

The "why" is a very good point indeed. Unlike the reader, I know what the devil's motives are, but not why he would pick this specific man to satisfy his curiosity. It's something that needs a little tweaking. The credibility…
on An unexperienced musician will prove to his friends that he can succeed in everything he intends, starting by being a male escort.

When I read the first line, I think it's about musicians, but when I'm through with the whird line, I ask myself whether the movie is about a young ambitious musician or a young male escort who got way off…
on A group of friends strive to find the silver lining in their lives without losing their minds.

I'm a bit confused. The logline says everything and nothing. I think it's a bit too generic to attract attention. If there's any specific situation that makes the striving either difficult or hilarious or just somewhat special, it would be…