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When the local mining company brings in external workers, the town of Hope apathetically slides towards its death. Slut-shamed 17-year-old schoolgirl, Tim, challenges the locals, the politicians,?and the mining billionaires into establishing a renewable energy business, in a frantic effort to save the town – and herself.
Thank you again. You are both quite right. I will go back to the original premise and look at more of your examples of loglines.
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When a disgraced schoolgirl is sent home, she finds her rural outback town dying. With everything hopeless, she sets about to remake the town, fighting with corrupt politicians, billionaire mining magnets and ?apathetic ?townspeople to create a prosperous future.
I'm a bit unsure about how to re-post. But here is a rework of the logline idea. When the local mining company brings in external workers, the town of Hope apathetically slides towards it's death. Slut-shamed 17 year old school…
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When a disgraced schoolgirl is sent home, she finds her rural outback town dying. With everything hopeless, she sets about to remake the town, fighting with corrupt politicians, billionaire mining magnets and ?apathetic ?townspeople to create a prosperous future.
Thank you so much! Your reviews have provided me with direction. Leave it with me to stew for a bit.
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A rework of an older logline
Thank you. Thank you for your feedback and suggestions. Your words, support and enthusiasm are of equal value to me. I agree - she is a story that needs to be told.
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Set against the backdrop of the social and political upheaval of the late 1800s in Europe, Mary is an unconventional and annoyingly intelligent woman struggling to alter the destiny and education of her gender – and still find love.
Thank you all so much! This has given me a lot to think about. I will re-post soon.
